Polyhymnia · Daily Eloquence
literary

with bated breath

In held-breath suspense — though these days it's as likely to be deadpan as sincere.

Why it works

"Bated" is a fossil — a worn-down "abated" that survives in this phrase and almost nowhere else, so nearly everyone who says it is using a word they'd struggle to define on its own.

It also sounds exactly like "baited," which is why that misspelling refuses to die: of the two, only "baited" is a word anyone otherwise has a use for.

And nothing this ceremonious stays sincere for long — the person waiting with bated breath is often not waiting at all.

In a sentence
Watch out

In conversation it lands as sarcasm as often as not, so if you mean it straight, give it real stakes or put it in writing — otherwise your listener will hear a smirk you didn't intend. And never "baited": the misspelling is common enough that editors treat it as a tell.

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"Bated" barely survives outside this one phrase — a fossil word, still holding its breath.

More — where it lives, variations, references
Where it lives

Shakespeare put it in Shylock's mouth first, so far as anyone can tell — and the phrase has been holding its breath ever since.

with bated breath and whispering humbleness

How it sounds

BAY-ted, two syllables — and in most American mouths that middle t softens toward a d: BAY-did. The stress lands on BAY, dips through the second syllable, then lands again on BREATH. Don't rush the seam between the words: the d ending "bated" never fully releases before your lips close for "breath," so for one beat no air moves at all — which is the whole point.

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Close cousins
  • · don't hold your breath
  • · on tenterhooks
  • · breathless anticipation
References