Polyhymnia · Daily Eloquence
casual

the best-laid plans

Careful, sensible plans that fell apart anyway — offered as a rueful shrug, not an accusation.

Why it works

Its power is in the amputation — we say the setup and leave the collapse unspoken, so the sentence falls apart exactly the way the plans did.

Burns actually finished the thought (the schemes of mice and men gang aft agley), but American speech kept only the promise and dropped the wreckage, trusting the listener to supply it.

What's left is a shrug with a pedigree: rueful instead of bitter, and done in four syllables.

In a sentence
Watch out

The phrase frames a failure as nobody's doing — the weather turned, the plow came, the flight got canceled. So don't reach for it when the failure was somebody's call to make: it lands as a dodge, and in a postmortem that owes a cause it sounds like you're declining to name one.

▶ Watch today's short✍️ Read the full essay on the blog

Americans quote half of Burns and let the rest fall apart — which is exactly what the plans did.

More — where it lives, variations, references
Where it lives

Burns wrote it about a mouse he'd turned up with a plow; Steinbeck borrowed the mouse for a title, and American speech kept the sentence.

The best-laid schemes o' mice an' men gang aft agley

How it sounds

Say BEST-laid as one compound, stress on BEST, then let the sentence stop short. The pause after 'plans' is the punchline.

Runs with
so much for the best-laid plansbest-laid plans, right?the best-laid plans of [someone]well — best-laid plansbest-laid plans and all that
Close cousins
  • · the best-laid schemes (the older Burns form)
  • · the best-laid plans of mice and men
  • · so much for the best-laid plans
References